Peer Review Revisited
Overall I think I improved from the last peer review. My confidence in reviewing someones essay and figuring out helpful comments to write has definitely improved. This time around I was able to make comments that give helpful feedback like about how sentence structure needs to be fixed or just adding a brief introduction to a topic that doesn’t make much sense. I am now able to give sharp feedback for most of the essay, like adding more explanation for a quote. I am very confident in making helpful comments on body paragraphs and the conclusion but I need more work on how to address the introduction paragraph.