Paragraph without Naysayer:

Arguments on twitter and engaging people in a sarcastic way seemed to resonate with Phelps Roper like when she talks with Abitbol about a holiday thats coming up for him and makes fun of the holiday she says “Thats handy with yom kippur coming up!” (Chen 10), she spreads hate through speaking in a sarcastic manner. She seems to only have “fun” when she has a meaningful/sarcastic argument with someone. Like I said earlier when she and Abitbol met in real life their conversations seemed more stale and they didn’t have the same feud they had online. 

Revised Naysayer Paragraph:

To make this paragraph have a better argument in it I could change “Like I said earlier when she and Abitbol met in real life their conversations seemed more stale and they didn’t have the same feud they had online.” to something more like ” People on social media would say that Megan Phelps Roper was very rude and argue that she was always spreading hate on social media, then people not on social media would say that she definitely is a mean person but not as harsh as her social media self”.